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so you're saying you can learn to use incredibly complex movements with a sword that probably require inhuman dexterity and flexibility not to mention reflexes in just a few years? and with the physical body of a four year old?
maybe, but different people different things, maybe you would've reacted differently, i unno
ah so we going yellow lantern, I see
this is within 16 years, think of that rq
well also factor in the fact that he hasn't talked to anyone else, he has literally only been able to watch her and hear her words/thoughts. he might actually be psychologically dependant on her I don't know
because he wants to be somebody, also he's a main character and I'm not a fan of edgy angst unless it makes sense, so... you might wanna drop this if that's what you want.
UGH please don't have the "human evil bad guy haha" trope in it, I've just gotten so tired of that
eh, she had decent development in the filler and perfect chakra control, plus her fangirl tendency is greatly over exaggerated most of the time. Plus she's sorta nit meant to be a fighter in the main series, but I have a few ideas for her development in this story.
no one knows~
he wants to teach the main cast and before you ask why to that it's because he's a teacher at heart and wants to see them at their actual peak when they are actually taught things.
He isn't saying he should be treated badly, just that they should be careful while handling him
just like your comment
I love this quote so much
no you
ahhhh, nice one, got me ta giggle
Danzo is an interesting character, in that he believes that the leaf should crush all the other villages and he will do anything to make them able to win. however alot of fanfiction often overestimate what Root does, they mostly do assassinations outside the village, not inside, after all why harm the village that you want to crush all other villages? Now Orochimaru on the other hand is a great example of why roaming the elemental nations is a bad idea, because while yes he has one spy in konoha, outside of konoha he has an entire village that he can get to hunt you down, or he could just do it himself.