Jaxiel
(ON REVISING STORY - That Overpowered Friend) Learning how to write~ Also posting stories in RoyalRoadLegends :)
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I do see passion in your writing, just gotta get better at spelling. The paragraphs are a bit too tight to read but understandable. Interesting read just needs a lot of polishing. :DD
You go in-depth when explaining scenes, def good quality writing. A good zombie concept for the story, title's almost similar to danmachi anime lol. chapters are quite long though but I guess that's more content.
Bruh, your writing style is already amazing. It isn't too straightforward yet still have dept on it. Anything else is just as good as your writing, worth giving a try
Hands down, I'm intrigued, the story has quite the potential. There were times though when the dialogue was confusing as to whom is speaking. Still, definitely worth the read.