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hey K.K Slider exists and hes a Chad
hes 2 years older is my assumption because she is talking to katsuki
the common kind of chakra is but nature chakra used by sages isnt
can you at least move somewhere with windows
kisame didn't actually absorb chakra that was all samehada.
the English is good but the character is already doing things the most full grown wizards wouldnt even try like If you think turning into an animal is dangerous try messing with ur brain mcgonagall. it leaves me concerned that the character will be so ridiculously overpowered that any problems or conflict they encounter will be redundant since they'll solve it easily
the fic has some issues key of which is how quickly the mc integrates himself in the group while trying to be mysterious and failing at it. but while failing the story likes to refer to him as mysterious for some reason and the characters have odd moments as a result like people thinking he's hiding things after exchanging 10 words with the mc. it's just awkward and is the totality of the mcs character