Wasn't there a Heavens Child with the ability to find the optimal path. Can't that be used to find the optimal path to cultivate too?

Don't hurry please. Take your time and make it good/grand/awesome!

Don't rush yourself :) take your time and make it good. that will be worth it ;)

Any news about the progress made?

I was not given the opportunity to use a free pass and paid 14 coins for it... . It still was a good chapter though ^^

Don't know how it was before thou... . Altough, there were some mistakes in the text (mainly the misuse of indefined articles) it was quite nice to read.

nope, criticism is just a normal thing. I won't stop. But middle school english as top 1 is just sad xD

that reply just shows, that you have not read any of your old chapters.. what I wrote is absolutely accurate..

First of all, Bo always has good grammar and a very good sense when it comes to detail. Thes one here is not set in a game/VR setting. And tbh it does not hurt. The plot is quite refreshing and character design is good. Obviously, Updating Stability is not a thing, this was a work not supposed to be continued, as it is or was a story to develop ideas for Bo's book Phoenix Phire. Btw this book is phenomenally. Either way this one here is Bo's second best word closely followed by TPA I, even though it is just a side project. I really recommend reading Void Agent!! :)

indeed, you don't need to be a "nigga" but this is so full of mistakes and errors that it is fu**ing hard to follow the story.

If the idea is to be judged here this piece would get 5* easily. Unfortunately, bad grammar makes the reading experience almost unbearable. Use of personal pronouns is wrong and that is a reason why the story is so so so confusing at times. Tbh it is hard to say something to story and character development and design. Focus while reading is simply somewhere else. If you are able to overlook grammar, spelling and word mistakes and errors (!!) then this one could be a gem for you. If you are annoyed by a shit to of mistakes and errors (again!!!) please do yourself a favor and avoid this piece at any cost.

This was so painful to read... 7th grade english incoming :/