Dao_of_mischeif

way too many grammatical mistakes and I am okay with that but for some reason starting from chapter 21 the novel got way too cringe but I continued in the hope if it getting better.However it got worse with the chapters contradicting each other.One time some guy said he found something a couple of days ago and it was exactly as he thought and he kept talking like he has been living for a month now even though only 3 days had passed even if there was a time skip it was not mentioned for the rest of the chapter.i like the idea of the world but I think u need to rewrite the novel .

I luv u

when will u be back?

author when will u be back

I know I want auto but this fuckin stupid author is making this so ridiculous

U my guy just nailed it. I haven't read much but from the first couple of chapters I started getting stupid ass mc vibes and from ur review it seems preety correct and this makes me want to know what novels u actually think where made well that I could read

Honestly the idea of this novel is amazing but u just had to ruin it .i don't suggest reading it for those who don't like stupid mcs and I am not talking about an mc where he missplaces his stats NOOOO. I am talking about an mc who fucking wasted 6 years of his fuckin life eventhough one day into the dungeon he fuckin lvls up.u see I don't even mind that he lvled up 4 times in the dungeon that's no problem cause he could have just been scared of fighting but now he just has to kill monsters or he will die.my problem is when u made the guys lvl up his teleportation 2 times and telekinesis 1 time after he entered the dungeon simply cause he fuckin practiced l. So that means that he spent 6 years without using telknesis? Seriously how fuckin stupid can someone be to have such op abilities and yet just give up and say that he is weak and just act as a porter. Trust me author, I know what I am saying , this novel could be the next solo leveling if u fix the first part by either eliminating the 6 years which means the Apocalypse just started and he gets stuck in a dungeon and starts farming his skills and lvl ING up or simply just make the 6 years he spent not wasted by raising the lvls of his skills saying that was farming them even when not in a dungeon at least the telknesis. Belive me author the amount of editing wouldn't be much but will seriously help the novel

Never mind it seems I was on drugs .Honestly the idea of this novel is amazing but u just had to ruin it .i don't suggest reading it for those who don't like stupid mcs and I am not talking about an mc where he missplaces his stats NOOOO. I am talking about an mc who fucking wasted 6 years of his fuckin life eventhough one day into the dungeon he fuckin lvls up.u see I don't even mind that he lvled up 4 times in the dungeon that's no problem cause he could have just been scared of fighting but now he just has to kill monsters or he will die.my problem is when u made the guys lvl up his teleportation 2 times and telekinesis 1 time after he entered the dungeon simply cause he fuckin practiced l. So that means that he spent 6 years without using telknesis? Seriously how fuckin stupid can someone be to have such op abilities and yet just give up and say that he is weak and just act as a porter. Trust me author, I know what I am saying , this novel could be the next solo leveling if u fix the first part by either eliminating the 6 years which means the Apocalypse just started and he gets stuck in a dungeon and starts farming his skills and lvl ING up or simply just make the 6 years he spent not wasted by raising the lvls of his skills saying that was farming them even when not in a dungeon at least the telknesis. Belive me author the amount of editing wouldn't be much but will seriously help the novel

Never mind it seems I was on drugs .Honestly the idea of this novel is amazing but u just had to ruin it .i don't suggest reading it for those who don't like stupid mcs and I am not talking about an mc where he missplaces his stats NOOOO. I am talking about an mc who fucking wasted 6 years of his fuckin life eventhough one day into the dungeon he fuckin lvls up.u see I don't even mind that he lvled up 4 times in the dungeon that's no problem cause he could have just been scared of fighting but now he just has to kill monsters or he will die.my problem is when u made the guys lvl up his teleportation 2 times and telekinesis 1 time after he entered the dungeon simply cause he fuckin practiced l. So that means that he spent 6 years without using telknesis? Seriously how fuckin stupid can someone be to have such op abilities and yet just give up and say that he is weak and just act as a porter. Trust me author, I know what I am saying , this novel could be the next solo leveling if u fix the first part by either eliminating the 6 years which means the Apocalypse just started and he gets stuck in a dungeon and starts farming his skills and lvl ING up or simply just make the 6 years he spent not wasted by raising the lvls of his skills saying that was farming them even when not in a dungeon at least the telknesis. Belive me author the amount of editing wouldn't be much but will seriously help the novel.

Honestly at the point I am in I jusyt love the novel and I don't usually do this unless I actually like it which is the suggestion where u do bonus chapters for power stones and tickets For example every 200 chapters u add an extra chapter than the original upload rate this will excite alot of people and make them use there power stones on ur novel