yes it's not astral pet store fanfic, it's overlord by using momonga. This can be considered as fanfiction

oh the dogtard was speaking, how rare. Did your master feed you? what a loyal dog

he clearly says this is only his opinion, why are you so dogtard? if your mother dies and your father remarried will you also follow your stepmother like a dog without your own will? that must be the reason that's why his review harbor so much response from you, what a dogslave metality you have, did you really think people will waste their time like yours who don't have better to do?

welcome to dog slave community, no matter where you go you will always encounter this kind of dog who will bark just to defend their master hahahaha

comedy? where's the comedy part? what chapter? can you enlighten me?