Jeff_Bash

how about giving the group a eevee it can evolve in future to match them

im on chapter 3 and so far its good no problems

im guessing spell check got you their just my guess though

mass effect would be interesting have him take his own colony of force users to that world and aid in creating civilization with his teacher if still has memories of him at the time when or if they meet.

im liking this story so far the main character is tolerable unlike other stories ive read and the other characters so far are well done as well as the world you have built so far im looking forward to see where you take it keep up the great work

thanks for the chapter

kiler B in the house lol