DesolateRipper
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DesolateRipper28dPostedthe development is not bad and I even enjoy it, however I feel some distance with this Novel. The progression of the plot in general has been rather fast and finer details somewhat glossed over, it's very condensed and I'd say it's a shame but the benefit is that you actually get to see progression but the price for it is there.
- DesolateRipper1mthCommentedCh 36 Chapter no.36 Ino's Fury
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welp
In the cramped quarters of his apartment, Naruto sauntered towards the single bathroom, a makeshift space with only a shower and toilet. As he closed the door behind him, he deftly jammed a kunai into the door frame to secure his privacy, for the doorknob had long been broken and his landlord had no inclination to repair it. - DesolateRipper1mthCommentedI whirled around and brought up my submachine gun as I saw a small little rusty as hell robot running out of an abandoned house onto a rundown patio screaming. "Kill the Communists!!!"
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hahaha I'm sorry but I'm dipping to find something at the very least decent
ââThey didn't know that their friendship would last for a long time and that they would face many challenges and adventures together in the future. - DesolateRipper1mthCommentedCh 10 Clone Returns In the evening, in the Naruto world.
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is he in his birthday suit? what does the fellow look like?
Reacting swiftly, Suzuki channeled chakra to his feet, leaping backward, covering nearly a hundred meters in seconds. He reached the edge of the forest, searching for a useful weapon. - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
simple simple simply redundant
Everything was in a mess except a table on which an old and simple but clean type writer was resting. - DesolateRipper1mthCommented"I'm just afraid he might leave me behind if I don't compromise. So, I already knew that he would not belong to me alone, but Cho."
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the romance in this is really tough to read haha
Lucas never expected to meet Cho Chang in a foreign country. - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
oh jeez
Things such as the scabbard Avalon, Zanpakuto of Shinigami, and several other abilities that can only be found in other worlds. - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
the obsession with his age
Although he is old, he is stronger than anyone present. - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
the wall grows
Skills: Occlumency (Level 9), Fire Shield (Level 9), Disillusionment Charm (Level 5), Killing Curse (Level 9), Transfiguration Spell(Level 5), Cruciatus Curse (Level 7), Imperius Curse (Level 9) Repairing Charm (Level 4) Shield Charm (Level 6) Shattering Curse (Level 3) Animation Charm (Level 3) Impervius (Level 3) Household Magic (Level 3) Cleaning Charm (Level 2) Legilimency (Level 4) - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
I respect it
"So, please take a good rest, Avada Kedavra!" - DesolateRipper1mthPosted
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this is missing the magic and wonder, but it's definitely not missing the cringe
"Handsome sir, haven't you already sat down?" - DesolateRipper1mthCommented
what a cheap friendship haha
[Congratulations to the host for making the first friend of the same age, complete the achievement: Precious friendship, get rewards: 50 achievement points, 5 gold Galleons.] - DesolateRipper1mthReplied to MysteryonBloodline: Void Elf (first awakening)