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Okrin

Okrin

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I love penguins

2019-05-25 JoinedUnited States
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
    Commented

    VUNDABAR , truly loving these chapters as of late !

    Ch 32 Vol.2: Ch.1
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    If that dog dies, im burning something.

    Ch 25 Ch.24
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
    Commented

    vundabar ! Loving the exchanges between a new chracater. Also loving the detail on the enviroment. Loving the book!

    Ch 19 Ch.18
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
    Commented

    Pacing is fine as is, wouldnt hurt to slow down a little bit. Show more interaction with the world around erik. overal has a good consistency.

    Ch 17 Ch.16
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    Ch 15 Ch.14
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    You did not say "no" to a Basara.
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    Path of the Fist
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    —A hunter said to his team before dying the same day.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    In the end, Erik gave up, he came to terms with the possibility he'd be haunted for the rest of his new life.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
    Commented

    Many a vibes from previous books. really enjoying them :)

    These two arts were reserved for those who passed the Trial of the Wild though and since Erik had fled during this trial in his past life, he hadn't had the chance to learn them.
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
    Commented

    Lets GOO!

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Path of the Fist
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin1yr
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    Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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    Death before the Beginning (On Hiatus+Due for Rewrite)
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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    (Hiatus) Ragnarök: The Fimbulwinter Saga
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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    I can Tame everything (Dropped for now)
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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    Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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    Okrin1yr
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    Return of the Woodcutter
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin2yr
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    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Okrin
    Okrin2yr
    Commented

    And it was declared this number shiw hold the history of men. Let the word nice be the word of power. For the number 69 is men's greatest power. Nice

    "Level 31…," William said softly as he looked at his status page. "69 more to go before I max out this Job Class."
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Okrin
    Okrin2yr
    Commented

    ANYTHING BUT HIM.

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    Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
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  • Okrin
    Okrin2yr
    Commented

    This raises a good question. To what extent are divinitys a source of power? If the divinity can be outdone by the weapon of said god or has the divinity weakened ?

    Clearly, between his feeble flames and the might of the sun, Belial's Divinity fell far too short.
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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