Okrin

VUNDABAR , truly loving these chapters as of late !

If that dog dies, im burning something.

vundabar ! Loving the exchanges between a new chracater. Also loving the detail on the enviroment. Loving the book!

Pacing is fine as is, wouldnt hurt to slow down a little bit. Show more interaction with the world around erik. overal has a good consistency.

Many a vibes from previous books. really enjoying them :)

Lets GOO!