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I know this is an AU but I wanted to ask if you’re bringing nagini so foward in the timeline just for this torture segment or is there going to be more reasons for it in the future
While I like the story at the beginning at chapter 17 and after it just starts to go down. Some examples are: Harry get information on teachers out of nowhere and starts to talk about how they need to change those thing but at that point he doesn’t even know if he wants to go there. They keep mentioning how Harry seems to not trust anyone but when he meets hagrid it seems as if they have been friends for a while. Also the inconsistencies and repeated line make it seem like it was written by AI or multiple people that didn’t read what the others have written. I’m currently at chapter 30 and it’s just terrible at this point. Like there is multiple time where the story repeats itself but with some differences. What I mean by that is it’s like there is a flashback but they are just flashbacking to what you just read and maybe add details or even change what previously happened.
Snowy should be moon if your going to keep that and the owl being a familiar
The ghost and the problematic history teacher are the same
From what I know is that lily’s magic and the blood wards dumbledore are not the same but are in a way connected. I don’t know if it’s canon, I’ve read to many hp fanfics, but there was something somewhere that said that dumbledore messed with lily’s magic making it weaker in a way. Something like linking lily’s magic to the ward he put up to basically protect the whole family at the same time but by doing that Harry was required to return to recharge the magic on him. That could be from a fanfic and the blood wards dumbledore invoked were a protection and observation wards.
How does the master know this. Is he guessing
When did he even get the ability to summon her?
On the horned wolf status the bloodline was primal predator and had the same curses that the mc has. I don’t know if that is a mistake or not but wanted to bring it to your attention
Obito was the one to release and control the nine tail. So he did hurt his mentor
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Why circumference. Why not diameter or radius
I mean in canon there was quite a few way to detect those under the cloak. I think the smell thing is canon too; didn’t fluffy find them through the cloak once. I don’t know if I’m remembering that right or not.
Didn’t she already use this one
What happened to meeting Percy Jackson
What is the difference between this one and the previous one