Review Detail of brant_badger in Harry Potter: No More Simping

While I like the story at the beginning at chapter 17 and after it just starts to go down. Some examples are: Harry get information on teachers out of nowhere and starts to talk about how they need to change those thing but at that point he doesn’t even know if he wants to go there. They keep mentioning how Harry seems to not trust anyone but when he meets hagrid it seems as if they have been friends for a while. Also the inconsistencies and repeated line make it seem like it was written by AI or multiple people that didn’t read what the others have written. I’m currently at chapter 30 and it’s just terrible at this point. Like there is multiple time where the story repeats itself but with some differences. What I mean by that is it’s like there is a flashback but they are just flashbacking to what you just read and maybe add details or even change what previously happened.