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Genuinely I want to thank the translator for translating this work it’s one of my favorites that another translator had worked on previously and then abandoned. The translation is readable but I’m begging you I get you’re trying to pump out as many chapters as possible but PLEASE! Proof read the chapters and edit them decently! Seriously translator, I would be happy to proof read and edit chapters for you if you want to focus on translating them. English is my native language so I’d be happy to help!

This dialogue just seems oddly written.

Perhaps it’s so highly priced due to his extensive sword training both under the church and after he became a devil?

Hey I’m probably late but for sure Emma Watson!

This is just an exact copy of the fanfic Harry Potter: Lost Son but incredibly drawn out. Taking 30 chapters to reach the same progress as chapter 4 in the original. I'd recommend checking out the original at least to get much further ahead.

This is an exact, word-for-word copy of the fanfiction "Harry Potter: Lost Son." I don't know if you are the original author and are just now posting it again on Webnovel. But either way, the fact that you are drawing out the chapters to such an extent is ridiculous. It took 30 chapters here to get to the same point as 4 chapters on Harry Potter: Lost Son. I assume it's to build up the chapter count and have an excess of chapters on your Patreon you are so heavily advertising. Overall very distasteful whether you're the actual author or not.

When I first started reading this I expected another generic story about a self-insert with Superman's suite of powers in the world of Invincible. And while there may be a hint of that here, I genuinely enjoy this. Every time I finish a chapter I want more and quickly scroll to the next chapter. Currently, I'm on chapter 21, and when I reached the end and realized it was the final chapter I quite literally said "No!" Author, I genuinely enjoy this story and desperately crave more! Prioritize your life over this of course but I beg of you, I need about 500 more chapters within two days. This is indeed a threat!!

That was when Brandon started acting cryptic though, with his creepy drawings and after he had already killed someone, or at least after he had attacked someone already.