Tasty_Treats_99
I'm a Noob, Writing very cool Webnovels, If you dont like them go Write your own.
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Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPostedAwesome paced story and world background, keep up the good work 👍🏻.
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoCommented
Does Clark get Black Adams powers ???
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPosted
Lots of Plotholes, it feels like the main character is not having a real conversation.
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPosted
It's a good novel with a great concept, but there are lots of unnecessary information dumps. the interaction between hela and madame hydra annoys me because they both feel like the same person.
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPosted
Lots of Chinese Propaganda and hate speech towards other nations.
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPosted
The world Background has great potential, but this fanfiction is riddled with AI use and has many plot holes because of AI. Anyway keep up the good work.
- Tasty_Treats_99a year agoPosted
So much AI use, you will get bored after 3 chapters, MC is journalising everything, so we get to see the same content repeated.
- Tasty_Treats_992 years agoReplied to 1_Am_A_New_God
Can you share with me, what did you find inconsistent about my work, i would be happy to be aware of any plot holes.
- Tasty_Treats_992 years agoReplied to HardenedWood
yup I use AI to get a basic framework of the content and then I modify it.
- Tasty_Treats_992 years agoReplied to Killerdrone
No they cannot wipe Loki's timeline. Kang is not that powerful. They did reset the timeline where Loki escapes, instead TVA makes sure that Loki doesn't get the cube. That is also one of the reasons why Loki's pruned because he is already replaced by time to fix itself as it followed the sacred timeline set by Kang.
