wuuuuu

need more, such a great story

the grammar doesn't bother me, its more of the redundant word usage, I understand what the writer trying to do. overall, its very promising, stopped at 50, going to let it build some more before continuing to read author, if one thing I can point out, you mentioned HP and the fights seem smooth, but its hard to grasp the idea of one hit kill, when damage is suppose to be fixated, or does it only apply when they are in the dungeon maybe make a side chapter covering this information, like key notes or something thanks

its has a feel to solo leveling, so far very good, a few redundant words but good, I am looking forward to it going into the 1,000s of chapters

not the worse grammar but not the best, if you have a little bit of cash, you can have someone proof read your material. overall I like the story so far

I heard great things about this, here we go