Ananta_Pramudya_2217

i think the story is to fast.its just like some harem chinese novel but in very fast story.but if you can make this story slower.i like to reread this story again

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ideas reincarnate with 5 wish 1.job system in death mage doesn't want a fourth time 2.all elements control 3.add job system with shop and gachal 4.id create and id escape/id destroy 5. personal version of devil chess

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