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ValentinL

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL10mth
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    just finished reading last published chapter up to date : chapter 59.Very good fan fiction, the flow was neither too fast or too slow to my licking, the power level is at the same time the focus of the story and isn't at the same time : the mc doesn't struggle that much while we are not sure exactly how strong he is however it wasn't a problem till now. Little foreshadowing of romance here and there. The writing quality is a tad lacking but that is absolutly more than readable.An enjoyable read overall

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL10mth
    Commented

    quiet

    "..." - Both of them go quite for a moment
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL10mth
    Commented

    Not the first time I see this mistake thus I'm allowing myself : you meant "quiet" I believe not "quite".

    Todoroki was quite. He didn't respond, well not by words. His will and intentions were clear as day to Aska. He was agitated and Aska was glad he got under his skin. Though Aska wasn't sure why Todoroki was mad. 'Is it the fact that he said he'll lose, or is it just the mention of his father. Oh who cares anyway'
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL10mth
    Commented

    I was not expecting this kind of reference here, pleasantly surprised!

    The scene reminded Han Cai of the character of Raskolnikov in "Crime and Punishment," who was driven to murder because of his desperation and poverty. Han Cai saw the same desperation in the eyes of the young man who had just taken a life. He realized that poverty and desperation could drive even the best of people to do unthinkable things.
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL10mth
    Commented

    keep entertaining us please, your are doing just great

    Ch 86 Rants
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL1yr
    Commented

    🦦

    Ch 126 Roaring Cave (2)
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL1yr
    Commented

    xp

    Ch 6 Max Word Count
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL1yr
    Commented

    Elsword fan passing by

    El, this is the boy's name.
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL2yr
    Replied to GifflarGod

    it certainly means unique, take a guess ;)

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, you are making a wonderfull job so trust yourself a little bit more!

    Ch 143 Trait Replication
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL2yr
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter, hope to see the next one soon

    Ch 141 The Perpetrators
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Commented

    ty

    Ch 103 For Richer or Poorer (3)
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter

    Ch 101 For Richer or Poorer (1)
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Commented

    he isn't wearing the ring?

    Int +1
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Replied to Fhrutz_D_Hollow

    seems like you forgot to change it

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Replied to Rakzo

    Well at that point I really thought the same as you, but with the following of the chapter it makes sense because he can have beetween 1 and 3 fruit thus even though it was not that clear I think it's fine

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Replied to Taitiruk

    Sita and the four remaining make it 5

    Now remaining 4 members also started to rush towards Kizaru. With the combined effort of 5 of them, they could defeat the admiral without much of a problem.
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Posted

    Very good fan fiction, honestly I was a bit afraid with the review were saying that he was in Luffy's crew but he would leave, before other saying that finaly he would not. So I decided to elabore mine. Well my review containt some spoil so if you already recided to read it honestly just go read it and don't look anymore it would probably ruin some of your fun for other who need some concret fact before jumping into it, here you go: (for my information it comes until chap 71 as you might guess lasted in my time frame) - For the harem theme, it is specified that it isn't and either it really isn't or it's so slow-paced that those who hate/don't like harem shouldn't have problem with it, but nontheless MC isn't luffy, he likes to flirt with girl particulary Nami whom he had a date with 2-3 times (some may say that it for the charisma stat, I really don't think so, fell free to debate this) but him "earning" affection thought system with Nami AND Robin can make us think that even though harem shouldn't come, polygamy may very well happen (at least that's what the system seems to lead him to do... chap 70~ reflection ) -For his power: Well he is OP and should since Arlong 'arc' be way more powerful than anybody he encounters (except Luffy's family and maybe Ener which it could have been a close call) -Story: he follow Luffy and has a system who give him missionS with rewards in kinda every island, he can level up which give him stat, he has an inventory, masteries management (haki, sword, guns...), failure of some missions mean death, he stick with the Stawhat crew but even though he could do everything alone observe them and let them fight and grow (he still bet the crap out some people but learn them haki at the same time so kinda make it MORE or less even). Character development: he first thought about simply taking Ener fruit with luffy taking care of him then leave for his own adventure, but even after taking Ener's fruit he still stick with them, at chap 70~ he realised that he was afraid of being alone and that he wasn't matured enough yet for his own adventure or really going into a serious relationship after thinking about the marin's death he caused driven by rage. Honestly wasn't excepting that much from a FF, really good job. Didn't give 5 star because of "Stability of Updates" that's all, if you like One piece FF, honestly try it. (sorry if I made some major grammatical error, i'm not used to do review at all and english isn't my strength but this novel kinda moved me.... and obviously there wasn't any more chapter to read)

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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Commented

    Just realized he managed to make a quite good explanaton of Zoro's throw with his luck requirement, unexpected good one right there

    After reading the description of the Shodai Kitetsu, Markus shoved it into the corner of his inventory and intended to leave it there for a long time. He wasn't as sword crazy as Zoro to pull it out and test his luck with it. If he failed to control it he could kill the entire crew or even kill himself. Fuck. That. He decided to ignore it and clear his head.
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  • ValentinL
    ValentinL3yr
    Commented

    Not enough wisdom to add some point into wisdom i guess?

    Wisdom (WIS): 65
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