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Good idea for a system novel would probably read it.

Not necessarily, as we understand teleporation today, you would essentially just create a clone.but if you could keep the mind operating it would perhaps be possible to arrive without dying. Just an hypothesis but maybe.

I can't read this story, the Mc is as dumb as a bag of rocks, and that is an insult to the rocks. The writing is bad but could perhaps be ignored if it weren't for the Mc being a moron. I will give it a bonus for being so bad that I laugh becouse of how bad it is, but outside of that this story is horrible. I hope the author improves and continues to write but for me, I just can't read this. Cool concept though just disappointed the story doesn't hold up to the concept. Have a good one.

I mean is this his first conclusion, one he can be stuck in a game, two why time travel? More easily explained would be some organization trapped him in a game and started the 1.0 version becouse of some reason.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon