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Ezaiahs2yrCommentedCh 17 A Sophisticated Flight Sword- Ezaiahs2yrPosted
I regret reading this. I know the quality on this site is abysmal but please do not simply publish a rough draft as the final product. I have no idea what I am even reading anymore. Every single plot point that gets introduced is then summarily ignored so that the weird slice of life story continues on. Its like watching one show on TV and then it suddenly cuts to a different one for a moment before eventually going back to the original. If you were wondering why people stopped reading a previous work, if it was structured like this one I can tell why. Sure its good at the start because you are just working with one major plot device but as you add ore and more the dysfunction shows itself. Its actually kinda amazing how the plot point of megawomans body was actually dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Even more amazing when every single plot point is also ignored until its randomly brought up again later.
- Ezaiahs2yrCommented
wow the fight starts but dont worry the random spectators are here to make sure to fill the word count
"Platinum Star Fist! That's a high level body strengthening martial arts technique! When did Garrett learn it?" - Ezaiahs2yrCommented
wow I never would have put this together despite the fact that this was literally mentioned in the last chapter thanks random exposition!
After hearing Claude, Colton Grey immediately stopped his actions. His outstretched hand paused in midair and his face showed a sign of hesitation and resentment. Although he wanted to beat up Claude, the young man was a helper of the Second Elder, which meant that he had the protection of the elder. Trying to hurt him meant offending the elder himself! - Ezaiahs2yrCommented
random exposition in the middle of the story, yaaaaaaay
After May had entered the academy, she quickly became good friends with Colton Grey by utilising her beauty. Some say she even offered her body to him. By using her newly formed connections, she achieved the fifth rank of the Earth realm about half a month ago. If she had used her influence a bit more, she could've stopped the bullying Claude had to face. Colton had an influential image amongst the outer disciples, and May could've definitely helped him get rid of the problem if she had tried. But she didn't.