Noname101
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i think it isn't necessary for the 3 girls to go defect with him because there's no reason for the 3 girls specially hinata because hinata doesn't have a courage for that and for me just beat up tsunade that will hurt her pride more and beating up tsunade is a slap to those konoha mongers for calling mc weak and raping is not a cool background for the mc when he's going rogue man
add greatsagemon for naruto
your fanfic is not the pokemon game that's why dont base it in game because if you base it in the game there's a lot of hole you'll get in the moveset
the author said that the mc is not gonna ruin the main story so he can control what to happen then this happen mc start doing some stupid things the zabuza arc is for naruto to grow not just some talk no jutsu shit for me going with this mission is a big mess for the story because he said that he doesnt want to discover but doing shit with kakashi in the mission whose loyal to the idiot monkey hokage
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a zubat is more important than a larvitar egg hahahaha thats a funny joke author you are talking to a pseudo legendary egg. if he is a ppokemon League trainer thats acceptable mindset but the mc is a team rocket member a DARK ORGANIZATION