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Overall it's very good. But I am wondering how his powers work since it's supposed to be like water bending. Will he be able to everything like water benders can do in ATLA or just manipulate water itself?

why do you call him a sorcerer when everyone in fairy tail is call wizards?

You kept switching between her/she and his/he. Then there is a small mistake in calling kurt and rouge brothers not brother and sister. But it was still good.

The story currently is doing great; just have to work on capitalizion then it would be better. Just keep on progressing as you are and your golden, just ignore the haters that come at you in the future.

A lot minor grammar mistakes but still very readable. I just finished binged reading the story is great so far. Keep it up.