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So far, I am absolutely loving this story! I belive the author is doing a fantastic job of retelling the story with their own twist. The Grammer is great, the story updates regularly. I am greatly looking forward to seeing how this new Eragon tackles the challenges ahead.
The Grammer in this story is absolutely horrible. I understand that it's translated but some proofreading is needed.
They almost seem copy and pasted
keep up the good work!
personally I would say keep it a star wars fan fic