AvaDumont
I like Touhou, hate harems, and think systems are over done but still have a lot of potential to be interesting.
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AvaDumont2yrCommentedNepotism wins again?
Ah! Don't be mistaken, I don't do this for everyone. It was only because I sensed no deceit in her words that I gave her a chance. I only gave her a chance for a interview, but a little less difficult compared to others.- AvaDumont2yrCommented
I have one big problem with this story I think, you dont show enough. You told us things about your character that you very well could have shown us through his interactions and stuff. Also the time skips to many for how little we really understand the protagonist. I dont yhink its bad so far though truth be told just should’ve been stretched out more.
Ch 2 Rampage - AvaDumont2yrCommented
… is this a charater flaw or just plot convience because If its a character flaw thats interesting.
She said all that while tears were streaming out I run over to Gaia and I can fix her but I don't want to ruin the storyline so I say - AvaDumont2yrReplied to ONGFRFR
Glad someone got it lol
"Well of course! You aren't dealing with the average human anymore-" The small sound of something cutting through the air makes me flinch causing the blade which had been thrown to merely produce a slight graze on my cheek. - AvaDumont2yrReplied to ONGFRFR
Her character would look similar to Jahy.
I am appearance wise for all intents and purposes what a Japanese person or Otaku would call a 'Gyaru.' With my uniform unbuttoned at the top showing off exactly how 'mature' I was for my age. Just like my mother I was without a doubt a beauty and no one could rebuke that, and as my philosophy goes, if you have it then you have to show it off. I mean what's the point in having treasure if not to let others admire it as jealousy wells up in their chests? - AvaDumont2yrReplied to UncrownedKing
Yup medusa
"If you insist Minori. Lancer, are you going to play as well?" I ask the now decloaked Lancer sitting on the couch next to me in a nightgown. - AvaDumont2yrReplied to Daijena
I dont think I'm fully understanding. What do you want to stomp? And I can understand not liking the style of story telling it has alot of vague terminology and just so much lore but alot of it could be seen as underdeveloped. Like what you can do with most magecraft is just undescribed for everything besides jewel and crest worm.
Ch 8 Out Matched - AvaDumont2yrReplied to officerdont
To my understanding the quality dictates how strong of magecraft a magus can use with or without a crest, while quantity is the measure of how many times someone can fire off spells. Like Manaka would be capable of using magecraft close to the age of gods but maybe like once a day because her magic circuits are top tier in quality but absolute garbage in quantity. Thats if she were a normal magus though.
Ch 12 A Big Sisters Resolve! - AvaDumont2yrReplied to officerdontCh 12 A Big Sisters Resolve!
- AvaDumont2yrReplied to SVCERVANTESOh yeah, Lu Chen is a part of a powerful family in Ba Sing Se. The second richest if I'm not mistaken. The first being Toph's family, Beifong.
- AvaDumont2yrReplied to Dark_lord_shadowCh 11 Donuts and Dreams
- AvaDumont2yrReplied to UncrownedKing
I'm happy someone got it LOL god tier protag Sakamoto-Kun!
Then in front of me sitting on a golden throne was a girl who looked startlingly similar to what I could only imagine being me and Manaka's love child. She was short with a large poofy white fur coat with a one piece sleeveless mini skirt which didn't leave much to the imagination in any way shape and or form. As her short purple hair was blown gently by the wind her feline-like red eyes seemed to glimmer at the sight of me and she began speaking. Though as the trope goes I couldn't make out a word that came out of her mouth! I'll just assume it was a bunch of slurs or something because what I REALLY remember from that dream is the most terrifying sight among protagonists, there it was in the sky, the face of a man that could most definitely make me rethink my entire way of life, a man so great that even saying his name requires multiple sentences! Sakamoto-Kun himself! Such a high tier protagonist is what I aspire to be, I'd hate to go up against him the way I am now. Luckily though it was just a dream, but I mean if it wasn't a dream that could have been bad… - AvaDumont2yrCommented
A bit lf a continuity error here. Yugi in battle city #1 is already established to know that he beat Maxamillian first. Nothing that major lol but like make sure to re read previous chapters sometimes.
"what" Yugi exclaimed "you beat pegasus too" - AvaDumont2yrReplied to Times_AvatarCh 10 Disastrous Ambush