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It feels like you are just telling what Ano is doing. Can't connect with characters at all. You are finishing a chapter wherever you like. There should at least be a frame which should be completed in a chapter. You can use less words to describe the frame but leaving readers with incomplete events for a while make us uninterested. More so that you are a author which can't even write properly in English. The authors who can't write well compensate with faster updates to get readers attention. And please use a check and correct apps like grammarly to write if you can't write well in English.
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