I hope he is still spending time with his mum and being a child and not just working all the time.

Really good again but I feel the chapters are shorter than they were at the start and the pacing is slowing down massively because of that.

I think adding the #pokemon tag to this fic may help you get some more readers

Honestly, with only 11 chapters written, this is one of the best Marvel fics I've read, at least so far and I cannot wait for more. You're insertion of your biological knowledge just enhances it further.Truly I hope this won't be dropped because it has tremendous potential.

I had been aware of this story since before it was even posted as Gnomebob had been telling everyone about an idea of his in the author's notes of his other story. I had thought at the time that it would be like other jumpchain-type fanfiction which I find boring and tiresome. I was wrong. I am so glad I was wrong. I have not read anything akin to this fanfiction and won't as it is probably the first, at least that I am aware of, to have so many original concepts such as the blocking of meta-knowledge which makes it such a fun and interesting read. The integration of multiple OC's is seamless and all of their actions and consequences are based in reality and make it so that the growth aspect doesn't become ludicrous to each reality even if they have access to multiple power systems. The interactions between characters don't remove you from the story and all it really makes you want to do is read more. Great writing all around and absolutely no way to predict what will happen next. Awesome job. I DEFINITELY recommend this story. Honestly just listen to the first note and read the first 3 chapters.

I'd rather you continue this new direction rather than go back because if you do the possibility of that happening again would be annoying and dissuasive to continuing reading.

+1

Great fight scene

i expect you to expand into the massive wealth of characters that is marvel so harem.

Honestly you just have to mess around with the filter until you figure out how to do it but i reccomend doing like min 10000 word count or more and if you want whats popular then do sort by hits and if you dont want older fics use a min update date.

A compelling story that's very well written without the negative of sounding too factual and impersonal. MC also the ability to make mistakes so far and has, what seems like, the ability to learn from them. So far shaping up to be one of the fics that you anticipate an update.

Your writing is high quality and enjoyable to read. If you haven't maybe you could post this series to ao3 and ff as well. Honestly I would never expect something as good as this on webnovel. Great vhapter

ubel shouldn't be powerful enough to survive

Great chapter but i truly hope you don't take a second family from him.

Maybe with a skill that gives boosts to stats and growth plus effects for himself if he makes the item themself

+1

If its the result of natural progression with interaction and not morax vying for it then yeah besides anyone could have saved bell and he would have fallen for them, maybe even millihore in this fic.

+1 cause i can't tell if ive voted or not yet

Naah

Great start to the story. Maybe a little slow on pacing but i guess that might fasten up because of the amount of worldbuilding you've done, other than that can't wait for more.