Thanks for the chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter!! I'm loving the story so far!

It's from a video clip: Porter Robinson and Madeon - Shelter

It has a good start, I'm enjoying the characters and the story, there hasn't been any depth to the world's history so far, but it's understandable since there's no need at this point.I hope the author can maintain the quality of the story he has demonstrated so far.

I can't keep reading this. The protagonist is presented as an experienced and professional player at the beginning, from now on the Author does not demonstrate this aspect in his character, the protagonist constantly makes the basic mistake of letting his enemies take root, makes basic mistakes that any believable character with the protagonist's alleged past would not make, the inability to make radical and necessary choices already puts this past in check, but the last straw is the blatant forgetfulness of resources that the protagonist has, which would minimize the present danger.From the chapters that I had the willpower to read, one can see the potential of the work, however this potential is destroyed by the protagonist with an 80 IQ, and other minor aspects of plot choice.I don't know if these problems are resolved in later chapters, but even so I won't continue reading to find out, as I've already asked for the pleasure to read.

Thanks for the chapter! It looks like Umami and Kara will have a short truce due to a major threat to their romance.