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Review Detail of Tabibito_san in Release That Succubus

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I can't keep reading this. The protagonist is presented as an experienced and professional player at the beginning, from now on the Author does not demonstrate this aspect in his character, the protagonist constantly makes the basic mistake of letting his enemies take root, makes basic mistakes that any believable character with the protagonist's alleged past would not make, the inability to make radical and necessary choices already puts this past in check, but the last straw is the blatant forgetfulness of resources that the protagonist has, which would minimize the present danger.From the chapters that I had the willpower to read, one can see the potential of the work, however this potential is destroyed by the protagonist with an 80 IQ, and other minor aspects of plot choice.I don't know if these problems are resolved in later chapters, but even so I won't continue reading to find out, as I've already asked for the pleasure to read.

Release That Succubus

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