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Tunery3mthCommentedWell, I prefer to focus on the plot, whereas for the lemon scene, maybe just insert it a little in the plot. and I'm looking forward to the next chapter,[img=recommend]
Not writing detailed lemon scenes, sorry. Sometimes I will create them, but sometimes I will also focus more on the plot. Of course, I will create each of them at some point in the future where the plot is focusing on one of them to develop emotions. This order is actually wrong, but the book is like that from the beginning. I mean the detailed lemon scene won't be written the first time they do it. But maybe the second or third time they are where I can take the time to focus on one of them. In the end it depends on the plot, the lemon scene and the plot focusing on Asia are next in line if you're wondering. This book still has a long way to go. I don't know whether to be happy or sad?- Tunery4mthReplied to Tunery
Maybe because the explanation of the sentence was too vague, so you immediately ignored it
The funny thing was, Eiji didn't even know exactly what the final boss in his world was. He only knew that in his previous life people called him the "Honkai God" who created Honkai monsters and his apostles called Herrscher who spread throughout the universe. The Honkai Universe itself is rather complicated, there is an Imaginary Tree that has many bubble worlds that are actually worlds inside. - Tunery4mthReplied to Zailo95
Yes, it was mentioned at the beginning of the chapter
The funny thing was, Eiji didn't even know exactly what the final boss in his world was. He only knew that in his previous life people called him the "Honkai God" who created Honkai monsters and his apostles called Herrscher who spread throughout the universe. The Honkai Universe itself is rather complicated, there is an Imaginary Tree that has many bubble worlds that are actually worlds inside. - Tunery8mthCommented
um, are the parentheses wrong?
{As expected from a brainless harem franchise. Even heroines like Rin Kujo can fall for the boy who abuses her and the young lady she serves as a bodyguard}. - Tunery9mthCommentedCh 13 The nice guy
- Tunery1yrReplied to Daoist2V9qN4
yup
In the [Death is Coming] film series, the protagonist will foresee a disaster in advance, in order to help some people who should be suffering, avoid the disaster in advance and survive. - Tunery1yrCommentedCh 39 Grayfia, Grayfia, what are you doing?
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thanks for the chapters, and I have a suggestion for writers, what if you extend the story each chapter to 1500-2000 words per chapter if you only upload 1 chapter per day, but if not that's fine too, because this is the story you created. I made this suggestion because I really like the story you made, so I hope the writer won't stop writing until this story is over, cheers XD
Ch 6 Chapter - 5 - Tunery1yrCommented
YNTKTS :D
"Benar bukan, pembaca yang budiman disana?" - Tunery1yrCommentedCh 1 Feels familiar
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maybe you can make classic games, like pokemon, harvestmoon, crash bandicot, or if other than that, maybe you can also make games that have a good storyline, rather than multiplayer games without stories, because games with stories will make this novel more interesting, like maybe you can create genshin impact, where the player will replace the role of aether (for boys) or lumine (for girls), or you can also make Elden rings, raft, etc.
Ch 42 42 - Cruel and Bloodthirsty Villain - Tunery1yrCommented
Very interesting hahaha
This book has been deleted. - Tunery1yrReplied to Takamiya_ShinCh 2 Ren VS Long Aotian Part 6
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Thank you for the chapter, and by the way, this novel is more interesting for me now, either because I read too many action novels so I want to see something relaxed and not heavy or something, but I want to continue to see the continuation of this novel, cheers authors!! (Highly recommended for those who like the slice of life genre) :D
Ch 18 New neighbors and reactions to watching anime SAO - Tunery1yrCommented
it will be very interesting, so I yes
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ATG or Martial Peak hehe :D
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Maybe I have a guess, later Owen will run into a heroin that was NTR'd by his boyfriend for never fulfilling his request, and then Owen will trigger a mission from the system to help the heroin. Well maybe it's just like that, because this is just a guess, so I don't know what the storyline will be like.
Ch 9 Hospital - Tunery1yrCommentedCh 156 Return