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I am talking about the soul/mind not body.
Tempering not Tampering
search for King's gene of pokemon. that unix is probably one with King's gene
Tempering not Tampering
It's Aura not Chakra in pokemon. Chakra would probably be the combination of psychic and aura powers.
Akeno 2.0
You might as well have created an OC than an SI. I mean I know he is a Saiyan and all but it's like his soul is not that of an former human but a brutish Saiyan. Seriously he has no creativity in thinking of ways to become stronger. like he has this nala girl and her rune magic and he is just like more gravity yay I get stronger yay. I mean he could have her create rune's for weights on bracelets/anklets, rune's for resistance (making it like his body is moving through water , gel, mud etc) for more effective speed, reflex, move economy(basicallymaster roshi's bee training without the ki part) training, bcuz gravity does this too just not as much since it's pretty much has speed restrictions bcuz not being able to apply enough power to move fast enough. he could have had her make gravity rune's on clothes instead of a specific place. make runes that would make him blind, deaf, effects of blood loss etc for training all senses without use of ki and effect of training when he's in pain or is injured.
For Broly I mean.
That was more likely because of years worth of training with his father and species of the planet and his innate Oozaru(ikari) mode(probably pumps up everything Saiyan to 10) .
Use "_" & '_' for spoken sentences and inner thoughts respectively. it's easier to understand then your current writing type.
why not?
Manifestation not creation lol
Shouldn't it be Manifestation stage and not creation stage?
Are going to make a series out of it or a manga?
The progression of friendship with Kyuubi is too fast.
Isn't it too early for growth and wouldn't it make him too OP very early? I do like OP MCs but not those that get strong very fast. It seems like heading in that direction, well we'll see.
Isn't the MC becoming overly arrogant like those young masters? He doesn't even have control or maturity like a reincarnator.