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Take them to the fate universe like age of gods era

Dang that’s just bad luck man hope you get fix soon

Thanks for letting me know, I was waiting till it got enough chapters so I can read it and not have to worry about them being to few when I really get into it

Just don’t drop it man it’s too good. I’ve haven’t found one this good in a long time

I’m very confused on why it stated on 05 and not 01

You should wire this in English !!!!!!!!!

Hopefully this doesn’t cost passes to read later on

Ok I’ll be honest I expected the grammar to be horrible but it was actually readable. You should take it slow because it feels like the story is going too fast and rushed

They are just translated for our convenience, the novel is original Chinese, I’m pretty sure

I say stop where you are and re-edit what you already have, it is very hard read and understand right now and you’re using the wrong label and us is making it confusing. You should also stay with one name for your character instead of switching it every sentence.

Stick to one term man right now it’s all over the place making it hard to grasp

I have honestly forgotten the progress of the entire story

The thing is good like really good but it focused to much on the others instead of the main character

Redo it man this good and you cou probably work on the spellign and grammar as well

Does this mean you gonna release more often

This is very there’s no doubt about that but it is very confusing to read and sometime makes not sense with all the errors in the sentences and story line, some gender are mix up and some character aren’t even the right power level think about it would someone that has a sprit with a rank of 20 when it first awaken really have trouble with some weak 20,000 year old sprit beast and where are her guards

I say the 3rd one but at least finish this one first

Wednesday is more then likely to murder the harem me mbers

Dude update this one more often, it is really good