jesus_hernandez

not worth it there is no king here only a slave .

while the story in itself is alright you made a tragic mistake you put mystical elements in a world where you really don't need to do such things.as the story moves along you will find it hard to make a plot because there are no really important events that need a assassin's particular skill set it's a nice concept but not needed. also the progression of the show is kind of slow most people watched the big bang theory and are anxious for you to get to that part of the novel.

it's always vampires why can't y'all wish to be viltrumite, werewolves, elves, dwarfs, or literally anything else

I Just hate when people go to the DC universe and the first thing they do is give away all their secrets and stuff it's disappointing become your own hero you got magic make your own base and mess with the justice league

look his powers are great however giving so many perspectives confuses the people and takes away from the main character also shield essentially killed his family him helping them is just depressing he could have become an antihero and opened up different paths for scenarios with other marvel characters also no random dude gets powers and just leaves it people want to see him build his powers and use them in creative ways to get ahead not be a lackey

the concept is intriguing but the character is written in a very dissatisfying way and is just essentially a prop for the story no actual training with his powers is very stupid and somehow gets over losing his only family like in one chapter it's a good origin for an antihero but this guy just becomes a plot device do not recommend

is this based in a specific world or not cause recently I have been on a game of thrones fiction binge and the concept of a system based on Minecraft in game of thrones setting sounds interesting

it should be a falcon

bro just don't listen to comments it's that simple

while it is an interesting concept I find that the author seems to be wary of deviating a bit to far from canon so the few chapters up is essentially inner monologue and the mc following the canon Harry's footsteps no asking the goblins about his accounts no buying extra books just essentially a bot hopefully it gets better