not worth it there is no king here only a slave .

while the story in itself is alright you made a tragic mistake you put mystical elements in a world where you really don't need to do such things.as the story moves along you will find it hard to make a plot because there are no really important events that need a assassin's particular skill set it's a nice concept but not needed. also the progression of the show is kind of slow most people watched the big bang theory and are anxious for you to get to that part of the novel.

it's always vampires why can't y'all wish to be viltrumite, werewolves, elves, dwarfs, or literally anything else

I Just hate when people go to the DC universe and the first thing they do is give away all their secrets and stuff it's disappointing become your own hero you got magic make your own base and mess with the justice league

look his powers are great however giving so many perspectives confuses the people and takes away from the main character also shield essentially killed his family him helping them is just depressing he could have become an antihero and opened up different paths for scenarios with other marvel characters also no random dude gets powers and just leaves it people want to see him build his powers and use them in creative ways to get ahead not be a lackey

the concept is intriguing but the character is written in a very dissatisfying way and is just essentially a prop for the story no actual training with his powers is very stupid and somehow gets over losing his only family like in one chapter it's a good origin for an antihero but this guy just becomes a plot device do not recommend

is this based in a specific world or not cause recently I have been on a game of thrones fiction binge and the concept of a system based on Minecraft in game of thrones setting sounds interesting

it should be a falcon

bro just don't listen to comments it's that simple

while it is an interesting concept I find that the author seems to be wary of deviating a bit to far from canon so the few chapters up is essentially inner monologue and the mc following the canon Harry's footsteps no asking the goblins about his accounts no buying extra books just essentially a bot hopefully it gets better

ugh I regret everything

nnnnnnnnooooooooo why this was such a good story and well written there were a few small tweaks that could be done to make it better but overall this was a solid story with so much potential how could you kill it😭😭😭😭😭👻👻

honestly it has a nice premise but the fact is that I'm not sure this is even English I read the first chapter and all I know is that a truck appeared or something

it was a good fic until he lost his arm you can't even call him metal bat you should just call it reincarnated with metal bats powers and due to my stupidity now a metal arm

best novel so far props 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤🤯

please do not drop I've been waiting and my life is becoming bleaker and bleaker without your fanfic.it was my favorite with a great background and premise and good character byplay and dialogue.one of the best fanfics I have ever read so please don't drop.

do you got a patreon account with extra chapters bro?

this story is unreadable do yourself a favor and find a translator I don't know what language you are translating from but whatever source you are using to translate is garbage I read 3 chapters and I had know idea what I was reading not only that there are only like 6 actual chapters

bruh don't drop this story it is one of the best. mc is not a beta and has huge potential though I would stop giving him power and let him master all the powers he already has maybe evolve a few also if you do keep this story going cause I'm not sure if you are even going to read this but I would do two more chapters on his current age then skip to him leaving shield.

was good till he became a devil you made him into another beta mc and made him less relatable as a character not only that but sirius black was a freedom lover you tarnished his name by making him a slave to a girl that he was pretty much stronger than not only that he got beast soul a really dope magic that would go really well in this world with yokai and stuff but you then forgot about it and made the the cover picture have nothing to do with the story might as well put the cover pic as sona.