Cyttorak
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Cyttorak4mthCommentedit'd be Hiruzen's office right now
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thank you for clarifying, I was also worried it was heading that direction
"I'll go," Dan gave his Wife a smile as he moved toward the door. "You might have been right, Revan's real goal was always the destruction of the hidden Sith Empire… even if we return all her memories now, she'll likely listen to reason if we show her what we can do." - Cyttorak1yrReplied to Professor_Light
yeah, it shouldn't even be around yet at this point
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Kazekage*
Gaara was also having fun, he didn't have many friends and since he was going to become the next Hokage people acted with way too much respect toward him so it was like a breath of fresh air to be around Naruto, who didn't care who you were or what position you held. - Cyttorak2yrCommentedCh 1 Death and a new world
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no
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slower but better translations 100%
[Vote here if you want a good Translation but the updating process was slow] - Cyttorak2yrCommentedCh 28 C28 Bad Mailman
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naruto
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thank you for not doing a harem
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this brings me so much joy
Q1: Do you like this fanfic? - Cyttorak3yrCommented
I like that he does whatever he wants but I wouldn't be opposed to him being evil either.
Q6: I have two separate plot lines planned out. One where the MC starts getting corrupted and becomes an evil being at the same level as Sukuna, and one where he does whatever the fuck he wants whether it be f*cking the plot or killing characters. Additionally, if you guys want, I can make him like Itadori Yuuji. Which one do you guys like? - Cyttorak3yrCommented
I've enjoyed it so far.
Q5: Is my writing style good? I feel like I put too much effort into either dialogue or thoughts but not into actions or the world. What do you guys think I should improve or stop doing? - Cyttorak3yrCommented
sounded fine to me
Q4: Is the info I wrote about curses, sorcerers, techniques, etc. fine? I did alter the world a bit because I couldn't think of a good way to give the MC stuff. For example, I added the clan library, but it also seemed like a logical idea.