while these types of chapters are nice when it comes to the world building and not just brushing everything off and saying they made it work. they do take entirely to much time from anything thats actually going on.

For a guy who's home is in the middle of a war and is more or less the leader and the main person to make the big arrays Wolfe doesn't seem likes he's really in that much of a hurry to get back home.

your grammar isn't the best but you often enough are close enough that it's an easy thing to gloss over. your story is good so just keep writing

What made you want to start writing? Was there a book/series or author that really made you want to write?

ah I misread it then. maybe Blastoise could do that then

forgive the girl but make her watch him plow Miyuki

I guess Antonio is the better choice since Beluga is already a master at picking up chick's. But I'd rather not have Ben die

pretty sure the new chapters are not appearing since you are going premium they are just being sent to the privilege's backlog

literally the same chapter as the last one

I just got the receipts on what Biako has done. I'm just happy to show them off

I know right?

you'll just have to trust that it was Biako who did it, I've only ever reviewed 2 novels and his is one of them

didn't end the dialogue

The author has deleted my reviews 7 times and i know it was him because i got a notification saying that my comment was deleted by the author. Scum tactic is scum tactic by a no morals author.

No reason this sentence should be separated from the last paragraph. It is a strange break in the dialogue