Caliban_Postie

they're very good. just bear in mind they start slow but then they ramp up quite fast. also, I don't think astrid exists at least not in the way she is in the movies. oh, but characters from the TV shows do show up in the second and third movies since those characters in the TV shows the second and third movies. I do believe the main villains are based off of characters from the book itself

ok wait beat jeanist, easrhead, and grab traino, are mixed up. to should he. best jeanist: world denied fashion designer and hero. grand Torino:semi retired legend Eraserhead: pro hero.

I think equal in size but maybe bigger than

something i kinda wish happened was that Kai's memories and personality took a large part in how the Mc acts. but that's mainly due to how weird it is too me to see a 5 year old acting like an adult. and yes while iIsee your saying the fact his parents were killed as reason why he acts mature. and this does happen, it just doesn't happen to the same degree your showing it. but that's my personal stuff, still love the story so far.

it's because in the books, unlike in the movie, the Vikings of Burke don't fight dragons. they actively tame them and most dragons are small enough that they are pets. All the slaves more like it since the Vikings tamed the dragons by shouting and yelling at them and hitting them. that is until hiccup tames toothless now toothless is not just the terrible terror from the movies. He's like a really rare type of dragon that starts off super effing small and then grows to be massive. I think in the books they did State toothless's size of his adult form to be like something hiccup the entire Dragon Rider cast and a house could be built on. that's how large I think he's supposed to be stated to be.

oh also I would honestly love any help/advice you can give.

haven't made one yet, going to brain storm a name once iIcan figure out what iIwant the completely original archetype to be called and based on. also very nice job taking Vanguard cards and making them into a Yu-Gi-Oh archetype. i plan on doing the same but with a different vanguard archetype.

hey i wanted to say this fanfiction is amazing, and it actually inspired me to create my own Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction, using similar concepts. but as to respect your work. while sometning will he similar since you pulled directly from mythology for how Tez and quetzal interact. i will be going a different direction, so iIdijt just blantly rip off your amazing fanfiction.

hey sorry to bother you again, just need some fresh takes on a name for the eldest daughter of Grayfia and Sirzechs

um that's not correct. you can he rivied with multiple different prices. it's just rare and hard to find. because it's one super dangerous, and two most people are a perfect mix between types. for the Mc shiro to be 7 pawns and 1 knight yes that doesn't work. since he would he stringer then Issei was with a lvl one BG. but someone can be reincarnated with one bishop, and knight if there one strong enough for both, and two would benefit from both equally. i think in Canon they have only shown off like 2 people ever with multiple pieces that aren't pawns.