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Author probably forgot, I did as well tbh.
I donāt think the evolution item has to exist already, as it could be artificially created like the porygon line.
I beg to differ.
Donāt forget Hermaeus Mora.
Didnāt she learn magic in atlantis, basically the source of all magic, and learn the body reinforcement magic which makes the greek gods and asgardians so strong. Considering thor nearly killed thanos with all the infinity stones, I canāt see how she doesnāt just kill merlin before he can twiddle his thumbs to use a spell with the eye of agamoto.
Mc looks like this
This dude sounds like one of the ridiculous villains from the one punch man series.
The ghost while possessingtheir body. Gotta get that self promotion.
You can try to deny it but seimei kikan is undoubtedly a magic ability, even if it is limited to within his own body.
He already has the supernatural breathing technique from demon slayer.
Iām annoyed that the fight he lost was described in detail, as I would enjoy the story more if it was skipped, yet the fights he won which I was really interested in were glossed over š. Feels like I watched a young master face slap the mc then the author just mentioned in passing how he beat them in the end. It feels good to complain about things but I think this is the best PokĆ©mon novel on Webnovel, and I have loved the story so far.
Most of thIs novel is fantastic, a very enjoyable lighthearted comedy, and the author has managed to build up the world of skyrim to be more realistic and exciting. My only complaint so far is with chapters 330 to 334, where for some readon the author decides to suddenly make the mc stupid and enemies have plot armour to force an incredibly cliche shounen powerup when Jon was already incredibly OP. I nearly dropped here but decided to jusy skip 10 chapters and keep reading.
I enjoyed the story so far, also bare in mind author that most people only comment when there is something they dislike which can be understandably demoralising. Personally I feel the use of the tumour was a bit heavy handed, and would feel more invested in the character if we were shown more of the āslice of lifeā style interactions between characters and scenes that happen outside of official plot, it would also help give your story a more unique twist and help it stand out. Thanks for the story keep up the good work.
I donāt care whether years or grades are used, but isnāt year 5 being someone who has spent 5 years in school easier to understand than 4th grade, which is not the 4th year in school, and the term grade is more often used to describe someoneās score on a test. Also have this:
I didnt see anything wrong with the story and was enjoying it (it was one of my favourite stories on webnovel), but I dislike all powerful characters suddenly showing up and completley changing the direction of the story. Good luck with the story author I am dropping now.