Dev_013

no way that's cringy ...bro it's perfect for me ...thanxx for the ch it's best one iIhave read in months ...well i read quite a lot ...so keep up the excellent work

ch are too small...

mc name is arthur pendragon vaner eldername novel cultivation novel with system tell me novel name pls?? thanks for the awsm fanfic liked it much more than other one piece fics

seriously I don't even want read this scene...I just skip the whole chapter just read the some dialogues...

simply amazing...you put so much effort in the novel ...nd really I have read all kind of novels everywhere ...but this one is simply amazing you have just place everything we need in mc... just perfect role for mc nd just as the perfect narrated... thanks for the beautiful story...

sorry but I don't understand a thing haha still I know author must have put a lot effort in writing the story so 5 star for that ...but yeah I don't understand a thing like what's the story about or what's going on in the story...

well you have got nice concept but I can't say you are describing the story according to it...there are so many mistakes in just this few chp.. the no of points differs so much and you explaining the stuff to much...just read the other cultivation novel as reference or something... I just giving advice cause bro u r writing the story with quite the effort there don't just write it like that ... one more point pls keep the no in status steady don't make it inconsistent... nd keep techniques name same don't change it by chapters...

storyline and writing quality is nice but it's boring ...yup boring to the point that I drop after 30 chapters... nothing interesting in this novel...why u say because it's just statics ... I come here to read refreshing novels with different ideas and some exciting stuff...not to find myself reading some struggling mc...haha there will be no fun reading if mc keeps struggling even after he is stronger.... so I will drop this novel because it's not in line of interest...not cause of writing is bad or anything... and buddy we r here for realising stress not accumulate it haha...

seriously if u want to get irritated than go ahead and read it... no second thought on this😒 mc is so annoying... directly proportional to test your brain power ...

plot is nice and the world background is decent but the execution of the is poor... there little to no conversation... nothing like any emotional moment... yeah you can not find any moments like that... not even angry or happy or any as you can think of... mc directly get into relationship...without even any developments... too many flows... yeah too many...