Paxloria
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I like good story's and good cats.
2019-03-15 JoinedUnited States
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1873- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
Pretty good so far! Where are the rest of the chapters?
- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
"Magic" not "Manar"
- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
HA! HA! HA!
- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
I'm
- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
"he'll" not "hell" Correct punctuation gives the words VERY different meanings! This is why it is important to proof-read & Edit before posting!
- Paxloria2 months agoCommented
"I'm" not "Im"
- Paxloria3 months agoCommented
PUNCTUATION!!!!! look over there. It should be 'he's' or 'he is' not 'hes'
- Paxloria3 months agoCommented
I love this story, I really do. BUT WHERE IS THE PUNCTUATION!!!!! Where are the "quotation marks" that clearly show that someone is talking? Where are the ITALICS that clearly show that a person is thinking, not speaking?
- Paxloria3 years agoReplied to Paxloria
It's about time!
- Paxloria3 years agoCommented
Finally starting to get to planet Earth!