Looking forward to how this story is gonna work out. I hope it's gonna be as good or better than your previous story. And if u need some help with grammar I would be more than happy to help you.

I like the way it's going but I just don't understand how he can't have more rage in him. They literally replaced him in his own family then forced him to kill while manipulating his feelings. He's aware of this yet he goes on like he's just a normal dude getting used to life. And how he easily started talking and semi trusting people is just weird. Since He's mad and should be thinking of revenge not how to make friends 101. No offense btw just airing my opinion out.

Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work!