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No, because I can tell it was written using AI right away. Although you've edited everything and erased most of the traces, there are still many traces of AI left in your story, including the way those dialogues are written. We'll, it doesn't matter, as long as the story is good, I'll read. Just, don't make the story too bland like most of the AI written novels. Write in such a way so that we can feel emotions clearly instead of just reading just to read.

Author, you are truly trash. The story started very well, everything was awesome, until the author started dragging everything for too long. There are too many useless battles. Leon could have ended these fights easily, but no, the author has to increase the word count so he kept dragging. Then there is the excuse of having only 100 something chapter in draft but here the chapter is something else because he has written long chapters with 3000 words or more and had to cut down chapters in three or more parts. You are on webnovel. why the fuck are you giving excuses of your drafts. you should have written according to webnovel's criteria. Moreover, that useless Syph's marriage. in his marriage, instead of letting Leon fuck up Syph completely and killing his families and lovers in front of his eyes, he brought Sophia, Leon's mother grandfather,sister and others in the scene? why? why the fuck did you do that? why didn't you let Leon show his wrath before anything? you are useless. many chapters are a waste of coins. Yes, the story is awesome, no doubt about it, but the author is dragging too much.

Author is educated, but now I think those authors who always calculate wrong is better. at least we understand what those sentences were supposed to say.😅

Well, this is an interesting novel. I like the starting of the story as well as the plot that follows the MC. The novel gets more interesting when MC suddenly travels to the cultivation world from earth... I just want to know more about his past life and how he died. what is his relationship with the mysterious lady and what exactly is the Infinity Symbol? I hope I'll be able to get my answers soon.

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