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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m19mth
    Replied to Drako343

    I have the same opinion too.I did have the same problem and did a rewrite to end up re publishing the old version too.

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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented

    Well, you know about B99 so IT'S NTr

    Also, Benjamin's old world didn't have Brooklyn 99 show so naturally, Benjamin didn't know that Amy would end up with Jake in that show. I don't think this counts as NTR...
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to _Bruh

    Ahh that, well yeah most who do that are only after sm gain. In the reverse, some of THE REAL writers write for the fun of it, or at least that how I start to write FF.

    PS: please try to endure the grammar and some miss spelling I miss in editing, as English is not my first language (not even my second.)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to _Bruh

    Sorry what?

    PS: please try to endure the grammar and some miss spelling I miss in editing, as English is not my first language (not even my second.)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to cris146

    as much as i will love to do that, i am not making Mc do anything with him directly. but dont worry there is somtging to do with tang san in the future, and you will liket it from your coment

    Ch 26 Shrek Elders Visit 3
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to jacke_m1

    any tip for writing and descripting fight scenes?

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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to Azathoth2

    yup, 4 max

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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to aidx

    thanks

    Ch 13 Talking buissnes and problems 3
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to ASHIRAEMPEROR

    YUP, just like that, but not the whole leg, just a little bit over the top of the ankle. thanks

    Ch 2 determination and new beginning
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to jacke_m1

    without smock

    Ray realized "AH That! yeah it was hard to make with only guidance device style, but I pull it out, so yah, the was fun to make" he put the mouth mask " and the top of two tubs on the side and start to glow in a goldish-orange glow. (pic)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented
    but Ray sighed "well, that's one of the reasons I refuse the invitation to Shrek" he look at them "let's talk upstairs," he said leading them to a privet room on the first floor. (pic)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented
    Ray realized "AH That! yeah it was hard to make with only guidance device style, but I pull it out, so yah, the was fun to make" he put the mouth mask " and the top of two tubs on the side and start to glow in a goldish-orange glow. (pic)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented

    Red for fire, and gold for the light one

    the use of the first one according To Mr. Scan (pic)
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to 23DY

    is that the full name of the fanfic as homestly i dont know it.

    first: Make Hao Yuhao a girl and make the mc have her and Tang Wutong as his wives.
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Posted

    rating my work honestly, what you think?

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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to jacke_m1

    as always

    Ch 4 CH3: time skip and to Fork
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Replied to Anarhia

    you are welcome, and thanks for reading

    Ch 4 CH3: time skip and to Fork
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented

    yeah, i am working on that but always end up with some left. thanks by the way

    Ch 4 CH3: time skip and to Fork
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented
    looking closely his color is pink instead of the white color of his mother, the only comment thing between them is the white-blueish crystal antenna, but the most important thing is 'IT'S REALLY CUTE!!', I mean how the hell does someone have it in his heart to kill a creature this cute.
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  • jacke_m1
    jacke_m11yr
    Commented
    "I want something different" in the middle region of the Dou Star forest, a kid not older than 8 y old sitting in front of a giant white snow deer with crystal antennas said while looking at the dark sky, the deer just look confused before the kid continue "you see, human only known way to advance is by adding a soul ring after every breakthrough." the kid face has a smile that shows anticipation to the future "but that what so far known, what I want is the unknown, something completely out of the norm" (pic)
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