jacke_m1

I have the same opinion too.I did have the same problem and did a rewrite to end up re publishing the old version too.

Well, you know about B99 so IT'S NTr

Ahh that, well yeah most who do that are only after sm gain. In the reverse, some of THE REAL writers write for the fun of it, or at least that how I start to write FF.

Sorry what?

as much as i will love to do that, i am not making Mc do anything with him directly. but dont worry there is somtging to do with tang san in the future, and you will liket it from your coment

any tip for writing and descripting fight scenes?

yup, 4 max

thanks

YUP, just like that, but not the whole leg, just a little bit over the top of the ankle. thanks

without smock