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Copy and pasted, bro. You already type this paragraph!
Yesss finally, the MC shows he is not weak.
You can read the whole novel even raw on other sites but the author couldn’t finish due to China IRL CCP crack down due to the author portraying the Chinese law enforcement as corrupt when the MC return from the immortal world when he gets all his power back and returns to earth only to find his friend being besieged by the immortal Chinese law enforcement (after the MC left earth all people of China was give the ability by the MC to cultivate while he left to go back to the immortal world with his 6-7 wives from earth).
Naw dude, if you going to put another different story in the novel start another novel instead of trying to fill up pages and chapters.
Very good
Keep the armor. Madara in suit and killing monster.. Lame.
Mmm, that a problem, if you going 3rd person story tell stick the whole way through instead of using “I” and “me” first person half way through the story. Are you talking about yourself or someone else?
Such a cop-out to fill up words for a novel, even used the back space to cover more space.
FAC?