thesupremeowl

Was thinking of reading it, read your impeccable comment and decided not to. I appreciate comments like these, because they are straight to the point, while also explaining the important things.

Honestly, I could've given this novel over 4 stars, but I'm really dissapointed with a lot of characters and how the story evolves with those characters. In a way, the story as a whole is very good, but the characters are a part of it and they mostly ruin it. I agree with many of the positive things said about the MC, but it seems his character is not that constant. When dealing with enemies he seems to constantly demonstrate his domineering side, but when it comes to how he handles women it feels very strange. Every woman he has met is appreciated even if she is fated with another and is going against him. He has spared multiple women for st*pid reasons and continues relationship with women who are obviously exploiting him. This paints a completely different person than the one who is ruthless towards his enemies. Also it seems that he allows many some of the people he considers dangerous to take progress without interrupting them when he has the chance to. He seems to be certain of many things, yet has already been surprised at times from his enemies' actions. I would like to specially mention Na Xinyi as something that has to change in the story. Although it seems that some of his other women are together with him because of resources, they atleast admit to it. While Na Xinyi, doesn't seem to be fully commited to their relationship and is even actively trying to hide the fact he is together with her. All of this with the purpose of being 'recognized' as a great figure by the people and doing it alone. Unfortunately, she till accepts every benefit that is offered by the MC and that is the only reason she has risen to such heights. P.S. I hope the author sees that and utilizes his skills to fix it and make it a satisfying on our end.

Well, I'm dropping this. Wholesome relationship with a character that acts like an NPC. Like the conversation that led to this was just her answering questions. Relationships like these end fast because they feel unnatural and boring. Real people try to find someone that they can joke around with and act with them like they act with their friends. This "wholesomeness" is still there, but it appears only after they joke around and then stop for a moment to relax. Waste of time, good thing I read fast.

Both girls have boring personalities, yet you can feel that Ivy's personality is more pronounced and not as basic as Daphne's. I've even started to skip some dialogues with Daphne, cuz she is like an NPC most of the times and not that involved in things as Ivy is. People just imagine Daphne to be more beautiful and frankly I feel like her beauty in most of the fan fictions has no uniqueness to it. Blue eyed blonde with perfect figure? C'mon that is the most overused appearence for the definition of beauty and adding that shallow character, that is soo boring. Man I'm kinda glad that I don't find her suitable, cuz atleast I can say that I'm not as basic as all the other guys reading this novel. If you have to choose between these two, just choose at the end of the novel, cuz I can't imagine reading romantic moments with these boring love interests.

All I see is 5 or 4stars without any good comments. First the quality of writing is decent at times and sometimes it looks as if it was translated with google. Second the author just throws things that he has read somewhere in the wiki at random spots in the timeline. He doesnt seem to care if it makes sense, since most things in the novel ddont seem to make sense at all. Third, the author doesnt accept critic and deletes bad reviews, yet he has made a patreon, which means he is trying to manipulate more people to read his creations. Its like I'm reading a fantasy novel where 14-15 year old teenagers have kids with other teenagers and talk about it like its the most normal thing. P.S. Im sure this review will be deleted, but I hope the author will atleast read it and learn something from it.

It would be interesting to see what will happen with our MC when his mother dies. Although I wouldnt want her to get raped before that, I want him to overcome the trap and then destroy the entire Ironborn house. Also the death of his mother can awaken some kind of interesting gift or atleast enhance his current gifts to a degree that doesnt make the whole thing a high fantasy.

Man, I don't really understand why people have to get so worked up about such things, this only made me more frustrated, because I felt like Olenna was the one who tried to kill Barbey and killed the little girl. It would've made some sense, cuz this could have opened some space for her granddaughter by the side of a powerful player. It seems that Olenna was actually in the dark and this makes things a little more interesting for me.

cringe

Are you serious?!

I hate when AU create their own rules that affect the whole story. It's okay to change the gender of some characters, even though it is kind of weird, but changing the rules of the universe on a whim and making the mc explain it sounds like the mc doesnt understand anything. Even without knowing much about dxd and not being a fan of it at all, I can say that making a being that wasnt even in the top three of the universe, the reason for an unbalanced universe is just... idk. Im kind of dissapointed after reading this.