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The novel had a good premise but was terribly executed. pros 1) decent writing quality without much grammatical errors 2) good premise and background cons 1) MC - He is one of those guys who thinks they are clever but appears to the stupidest out of all of them. He has read the novel before . But acts nothing like that. He gasps , exhales and smirks at each and every thing. According to him , being with a NERD is somehow worse than being with a hero who has previously killed him before due to his inadequacy . He is much too talkative for a guy who has just been transmigrated and he wishes to jump into the fight immediately????. To add insult to the injury, he thinks with his lower half and has a savior complex. I was rooting for the villains and other heroes most of the time rather than the MC. He is one of the most terribly written characters in the entire novel. Dumb and arrogant is a terrible combination. Kinda sad .

Good Novel. It belongs to the harem genre. but the MC is not a simp. He is ruthless to his enemies. Has good writing quality. My suggestions: 1) Expand on the world background a little bit more. Overall very solid work. Keep the chapters incoming.

It is a pretty bad novel. The MC keeps gifting the hero with artifacts, weapons, and heroines . He suffers from Japanese MC syndrome. The villain( ie novel MC) is not classy. The writing quality is not upto par........ After transmigration , the MC keeps the same shitty personality and is ill spoken to his father and family. He gets his title stripped off and yet is non chalant about it. Dear author , I understand that The MC is inherently lazy and don't wish to fight the Main villain. But that is not an excuse to give all his stuff and belongings to the supposedly wannabe hero. ( gifting his maid felt like NTR ) I usually dont criticise novels . but you as an author has to change this mindset and accept criticisms from your readers if you want to mature as an author.. i am deeply disappointed in this work. Pathetic mindset of the MC

Okay novel. But has very poor writing quality and a lot of grammatical errors. The character interactions are bland and lacklustre. This novel could have been good if these faults were corrected.

It is an okay novel. The concept is cool pros 1)The whole Concept of fights between aliens and summoned creatures is good 2) mythology 3) funny - shameless but clever mc Cons 1) The writing quality is very poor. A lot of grammatical errors. 2) The power levels of characters are very poorly explained. The idea of ENA exchange and its complexities might give you a brain aneurysm . 3) Romance between characters are very poorly done. 4) The MC keeps going on missions without much effect on the story . You get a lot of secret organisations , kingdoms and associations . But they keep on fighting between themselves rather than the bigger threat ( which are the aliens). 6) The Character of the MC needs more development . Overall, it is on okay novel but terribly executed

I couldn't continue this novel past the first few chapters. A lot of swear words. The MC keeps making enemies unnecessarily. I understand that they were already enemies beforehand but MC keeps insulting them and enraging them even without developing adequate strength to protect himself. He is lazy, and thinks with his lower half. You might say that I came to this conclusion without reading much. True . But i can't continue to torture myself

It is a good novel. It has good writing quality and world building. The MC is ruthless to his enemies ,but loves his family. It is a harem novel but the MC is not a simp . Although the novel might feel similar to the ones that you might have read before , but it has its own charm and quality that will keep you interested in the long run . Good work author 👏. We expect a lot of great works from you.

Very good novel. Writing quality is excellent. MC have good character development. ( MC initially was kinda dense about heroines feelings but later embraces his playboy side. ). He is Strong and is not afraid of offending others if need arise..He does not hide his powers and is not a simp. Good job on the rework author. Please keep writing the novel. We expect a lot more great works from you .

It is a good novel. Writing quality is decent without much grammatical errors. My suggestions 1) MC can have more of a character development. He needs to be strong , should have have clear goal and aspirations. He should not act like he is merely a tool for others to utilise. 2) It is better if the MC does not develop a hero mentality in my opinion . He can be selfish at times . Overall, a solid read. I will keep reading this novel.Good work and keep improving.

Glad that I could clear the misunderstanding 🙂