BookWorms007

Glad that I could clear the misunderstanding 🙂

I thought that the MC was manipulating his enemies. But in this novel, the MC is manipulating his harem members which I seem to dislike. Again , I said that I was not hating on this novel nor the author. Didn't I ? I just said that it was not my type of novel. But now I see a CLOWN calling a completely unrelated stranger who had not shown any sort of hostility to the novel nor he himself calling out on other people . I think it's time to introspect on who the clown actually is ...

The first 25 chapters of a novel are crucial for bringing in more readers and to keep the current readers interested to purchase the remaining chapters. You can't expect readers to blindly buy the remaining chapters hoping that the novel would get better with time. The author should have provided some information regarding the MC and world background rather than focusing on unrelated people who we as readers have no interest in knowing further. The first 25 chapters provides nothing of value to the novel and does not keep the readers engaged and interested . This is why most of the readers such as me myself has deserted this novel.

The novel has good drawing quality. But that is the only plus point in this otherwise worthless novel . The MC is a Simp ( a typical beta male) . He is ridiculed and bullied by his inlaws, slapped by his wife, cheated on by his wife ( she is bisexual. She cheats with another girl). His wife uses him as a shield criticises and questions all his actions. Yet , the MC still goes back crawling into his wife( and her inlaws).He says they have not done anything wrong . He is a typical pushover mc. I have never been so frustrated by a novel before. Dear future readers, stay away if you guys don't like beta low class MC.

It is a good novel with excellent writing quality without much grammatical errors. However , this is not my type of novel. The author discusses in detail regarding dao,fate, reincarnation ...etc in the novel which made the novel seem far too boring for my taste. Even the romance aspect seems sidelined in this novel. I know that the author tried to reduce the number of cliches that are usually found in similar cultivation novels. But completely avoiding them makes the novel far too bland. We as readers are not interested in the intricacies of Dao or the cultivation world. ( We are not going to do a thesis work on the concept of Dao.) Most of the readers read such novels for gratification purposes which this novel fails to provide due to focussing too much on higher concepts that are not to out understanding. This novel would have been far better if the author focussed more on the main character ,his romance life, and world building. However this is a good novel for those readers who want to know more about dao and whatnot. But I am not one of that reader.

This novel had huge potential. But the author failed to capitalise on the novel idea. Let me explain. Author fails to properly flush out the characters and hence they seem 2 dimensional. The world is poorly explained . The conversations seem bland. To top it all of, the MC thinks with his lower half. For a novel to be successful , plot should take the centre stage ( and not R18) . Otherwise , there is no difference between this novel and a p*rno.

This novel had huge potential . But sadly, the author failed to keep the readers entertained. Let me explain.The first 10 chapters just describes a war between 2 nations . The MC is present only in 2 of those chapters .The author wants us to remember and sympathise with characters that we as readers have no prior exposure to. It simply feels as reading a war log. The author gives much unnecessary importance in fights that the MC has no direct participation in. The author should have read tyranny of steel to draw inspiration on how to keep the readers entertained . Also, the novel is too damn slow. It takes about 70 chapters for the MC to be free of his slave status (let alone controlling an army). I can't imagine the number of chapters that would be necessary for the MC to reach the position of a king. I don't have enough patience to wait for all those chapters. I came here hoping to see kingdom building and engaging in battles between nations ( for that to happen, the MC should be the king obviously ) . Also, the MC is a Simp to his harem members which is another let down. This novel would have been much better if the author had focused more on MC himself rather than all those unnecessary battles / schemes at the start..... I am out of this novel. Far too boring in my opinion.

It is a very good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. Despite being a harem novel, the character of the the MC is good. He is ruthless and intelligent ( and not a SIMP). Keep going author.💪

I loved this novel initially. But as chapters went by, frustration began to build up. This novel is filled with info dumps. ( For eg: It takes about 10 chapters for the MC to transmigrate , About 40 chapters to get a system and awaken ) . Imagine a novel goes premium even before the MC gets his system/ hack. Also , the MC is a mess .He appears to be a siscon with mental issues pertaining to his unsavory past. A lot of chapters are wasted on his nightmares and internal monologues. I understand that as an author you have to properly flesh out characters. But don't you think it's too much????. Get to the plot already.The author could have tried adding the info dumps in between major plotlines. But rather he chose to provide all the info dumps at the beginning of the novel. Resulting in the plot crawling at a snails pace. And to top it all of, I hate the attitude of the system . Truly infuriating to see the system act all smug and high all the time . The novel gets boring way too fast seeing no real action or plotlines. Just plain old mc interacting with his family members.To give a perspective of how slow the story is, the MC started his training only at chapter 82. It took about 100 chapters for the plot to start .Sadly, this not my type of novel.

I am a very picky reader. I hate MC's who are not ruthless enough with a hero complex . Such heroes most often tend to be idiots/ simps . Hence , this novel provided me with a refreshing take on the usually bland MC genre. The MC in this novel is ruthless to his enemies yet loving to his family members. He most often keeps a cool head and does not rush into fights that he know he can't win . He keeps his calm and then dishes out revenge in the most satisfying way possible. He is not a hypocrite and is not aversive to killing for achieving his objective. The writing quality is excellent without much grammatical errors. His power progression is well paced ( does not make you feel bored) . The only suggestion that I have is to include the other girl as his wife as well ( since she bears the child of the MC ) . Eventhough MC had no direct physical role in the conception of the child, he should take responsibility . Moreover the attitude of the girl seems to be good and seems to care for the well being of the MC. Also, I would like the author to explain the stages beyond celestial stage. It seems confusing. We don't have an idea regarding the power levels of his enemies beyond the immortal stage . It seems vague. Also a little bit of kingdom building will do good to the novel. Let the common people understand that the MC is not heartless as his enemies seem to project.