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This is basically good, how it goes from weak to strong then the plot. But you make it very dependent on the system and don't take full advantage of the system (like extracting a monster's physical attribute maybe? Or someone with a physical strength?) Or even if he should be able to train to strengthen himself, he can have powers other than the system. And why is he always so naive? Even though he has experienced bad things that should make him smart and assertive personality .. Well don't be annoyed, this is just my opinion and people's opinions vary, but I'm going to stick with this because it's interestingđ