Overall it's a decent novel that puts to shame some of the others I've read from Chinese authors. The main issue outside of the poor translations are the things that aren't named correctly and that there are multiple 5 star ratings that are bot copy paste ai stuff as they all say the same thing but in a slightly different way using larger words then 95% of the other reviews you can find on normal novels.

It's not the worst one that I've read but it could use some warnings like heavy AU or off the rails plotline. Or something like condensed plot. As the Harry Potter world had it's story merged down to a month or less of what should've had at least 6-8 months worth of content. Which could've kept the same with time skips. Or by not 100%ing the side missions. Feels kinda bad when authors break plot lines in order to complete all their side quests they make for the points they'll end up using to make stuff overpowered.

The story is a rather nice touch with some refreshing ideas on the Oshi no Ko anime. The only downside to this story is that it tries to come off as a spy x family story but it's more like a John Wick story with its marker like assassination the same thing John Wick had to complete to quit being an assassin in the first place. This doesn't make it bad but I'd hope there's either more spy x family references or just making a new title and remove said references that don't involve the story.

Tsunade would never go along with anything in the story, and would quite literally destroy the main character and everyone who would tried. So outside it being unbelievable it's just forced plot with fake personalities. I'd suggest adding a Heavy AU NTR tag since it's about as believable as a cow on the moon without being in any type of oxygen enclosure

While it could worse, the fact Bella is the love interest borderlines ntr given their weird destined partner bull, and the fact the character seems like a flimsy piece of paper despite being the equivalent of a racecar vs a snail.

Something I find also funny is how protego is something that even most ministry employees can't cast let alone general wizards so Khan is fairly powerful as is, if you don't count the ancient magic, which leaves just experience.

I think Professor could work, for the simple fact that Hogwarts is and has been known for horrible teaching in the recent years with the curse and the removal of books and stuff banned between the older times and current. If being a full professor is bad, maybe have hime become a Teaching Assistant while being privately tutored to catch up on Owls and such? As you had how Dumbledore was touched by what his friend did so Dumbledore helping him would make sense?

Its definitely something I like but wish there'd be more of. Nier novels seem rarer if it has a story with it. Definitely keep up the good work, but I just hope you keep updating.

I've been enjoying the story a lot, except for your rather obvious act of not saying whether Jessica is an interest, harem no harem, ECT. It's been ten+ chapters of this ambiguous answer and I gotta say I have to drop it. Your story has everything else going good.

Oh joy, three more chapters of false pretenses as even in danmachi at long as levels were high enough they could easily fight the level above them unless they were at the max of that level. So I gotta say I'ma have to drop it as it's dropped my expectations into the mud with the cliches. It's great quality writing just very cliche.

Honestly been liking it, but uh he totally needs a silver knock off Rhitta axe, why silver and not the original color? Well he'd hopefully get it with the durandal enchant but also to show it's not Rhitta.

Btw he could always wash some gold by slipping in ounces for gold panning or something. Or by forging gold into simple rings and bracelets.

Definitely a nice story so far, let's just hope no to the woman who'd basically use anyone on two legs if they were above a 6 and gave her attention aka Jessica.

This has been a great story except for the major plot hole next to the fact he can flirt with everyone and even elves who disdain said stuff typically. With how the stats were for each level up by the time he became level 3 he'd be stronger then most level 10s if you take the average stats of each top tier adventurer when leveling. The stats should've capped at 1500 as most people forget the falna is based on the basis of a average level that you're at which is why bell could skip through levels despite taking it easy since his actions were judged against the average of his level.

Gotta say while the quality isn't bad along with the world background, some things just feel meh. While it could've been better given it's a hentai fic it's not inherently bad except for the prologue.

Honestly the first chapter was pretty cool, it could've been a nice build up with him as a crow trolling and messing around for at least 10 chapters and slowly evolving but it went full deep end of the "I got a overpowered mom and I slaughter anyone and anything and then transform all the avengers into my toys." In the end this novel went from a nice idea to a beyond God level power trip.

Honestly it's okay, story idea more unique then simple gamer. Accesses some more unique worlds. While people seem to gripe about romance it seems they don't realize people in life do way crazier after knowing each other for a day. A man in a stressful situation trying to survive finds basically such a nice woman and clicks with her it's at least way more reasonable than most romances on the platform. I would love to see more non popular worlds instead of just going to main stream worlds for missions.

Love the story, you really do have a solid grasp on this character. Would love to see Jaune go-to Food Wars and just insult them by ignoring their food as if it was just better then average. Or him destroying the guy who says food other then a certain type isn't food.

Great Chapter, and I wouldn't add the starforge as its overused, and a Commonly known Sith Item, as It'd probably make him #1 kill list from every force user and even Palpy would send fleets after him. Basically its a deathwish In my opinion. Would love to see the Spartans getting Jetpacks so they can dunk on groups of Droids for Naboo

There is at least 7 actually, confirmed, from photos. I assume it maxes out at 9 or so