JUSTHEAR

Chapter 340 is missing, it jumps from 339 to 341.

what?!? when did geng lu go to an city?!?

Author you posted the wrong chapter, it jumped from 169 to 176.

Does Gwen have aipom or ambipom? At the beginning you wrote aipom, but then you refer it as ambipom.

Good pacing of storytelling and character development. Sometimes a bit too cliche, but that's what makes it standout without being too overbearing. Great story thank you author, it was a great adventure.

It seems to be an author self insert or something. Everything is that happens is too forced.

The grammer is all over the place almost as bad as mtl. The MC depends so much on the system he might as well not returned to the past due to his minimal interaction with the world around him.

>He seemed to be the kind of person neglected by his sect. omg so hilarious

so many misunderstandings haha

I wonder if he's actually OP in a fight...