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CanadianWolf6hCommentedWas it not a single egg that produced a single baby falcon? Then why do you have it worded as there is more than one? You need to drop the s and change them to it, etcetera.
In the castle's study, an unpleasant bird call was heard from time to time. The fledgling Wind Falcons were quite ugly, covered only with fine down that was so thin it was almost invisible, and curled up tightly against the skin, making them look like plucked chickens. Compared to the streamlined bodies of adult Wind Falcons that roamed the skies, they were worlds apart.- CanadianWolf7hCommented
There is only one Li dragon horse and only one flame dragon horse so why do you have them listed in plurals?
The lush alfalfa stretched endlessly, its growth most vigorous near the Alfalfa Cordyceps. This meadow was occupied by the Li Dragon Horses, and other horses dared not graze here. Occasionally, Fire Dragon Horses would stealthily come to take a few bites but would get bitten and chased away if the Li Dragon Horses discovered them. - CanadianWolf8hCommented
Should the young cows not be moved farther away just in case lol.
The beacon tower was ready, the bunker disguised, the passages walked through multiple times with no obstructions. The smoked grass was harvested and piled on the beacon tower, ready to be ignited at any moment. Young cows were kept not far away for feeding, while Old Hua and Old Black, two aged dairy cows, were tied at the edge of the beacon tower. - CanadianWolf9hCommented
Add to that spoiled seafood and seaweed. Awesome fertilizer.
Liszt was changing the agricultural methods of Fresh Flower Town—every hamlet had begun to popularize the use of manure, wood ash, and pond mud as compost. - CanadianWolf14hCommented
Title not tile :)
Blending in with the crowd, Li Weiliam Tulip would probably not stand out at all. Yet he was the master of Coral Island, a Sky Knight who earned the tile of Earl through his own efforts. - CanadianWolf14hCommented
You called Mrs Morson a he in the previous chapter.
"How could I be stressed, Mrs. Morson? I have seen livelier occasions at the Earl's villa. I can handle this," Carter tucked away the handkerchief, "Are Young Master Levis and Miss Li Vera's rooms ready?" - CanadianWolf1dCommented
No wonder this young girl ended up like that. Mother sold her underage daughter to men, her grandfather used her then threw her away. What other things happened to make this child so deranged. I hope she can break the cycle and not become what she was. It would be good if they both had good lives.
She had to stop the past from repeating! - CanadianWolf1dCommented
pretty corrupt police and media there.
She gave away Daiyu's schedule and address to her stalkers, resulting to her being gruesomely raped. Then, she bribed the police investigating the case to release the explicit videos and photos taken of her. She bought out several media outlets and had the news manipulated to look like Daiyu enjoyed it. She had them brand her as a slut instead of a victim! - CanadianWolf1dCommented
where does the dog head come from?
"Young man, you might as well give them the gold dog head. You're still young; if you get seriously hurt, your parents will be heartbroken." - CanadianWolf1dCommented
gold nuget you mean.
They had originally planned just to scare Tang Feng a bit, hoping he would hand over the gold dog head without a fuss. - CanadianWolf1dCommented
You mean it would break bones more likely then cause a gash right?
If it landed, it would at least cause a terrible gash. - CanadianWolf1dCommented
triple instead of treble 🙂
Now, Mr. Xu was finally angered, his volume increasing several decibels, "Then tell me, what's wrong with this bowl? If you can explain, and you're correct, we at Jifeng Hall are willing to compensate treble the amount." - CanadianWolf1dCommented
self built building? How does it build itself?
He rented a room in a self-built building located in the old district, five stories tall, with him residing on the second floor. - CanadianWolf1dCommented
He threw his brain away a long time ago.😂😂
His brain is okay, right? - CanadianWolf1dCommented
Did you forget that you are after her cousin? This one is reserved for someone much better than you. You cannot compete. 😂😂
Tan Mo has been booked in advance by his family. - CanadianWolf2dCommented
They have finally remembered the brothers name wow.
For the first three years, all Black Tulip Magic Potions would be handled by Levis. Liszt would then take a share of the profits—at a rate of thirty percent in Coral City and twenty percent in Falcon Town—according to market prices. - CanadianWolf2dCommented
Again Vera is not talking about Liszt but the brother with no name of his own here.
"I hadn't planned on it before, but since Liszt has invited me, why not?" Even though Vera lacked the talents of Liszt, her desire for the Sky Knight title was just as strong, "and don't forget, I also have an elf." - CanadianWolf2dCommented
Omg fix the names for crying out loud. You have a monologue going between one persons name here for two brothers. Did you forget the other brothers name, I sure have as I haven’t seen it since shortly after the brother finished his tour of the town.
After thinking for a moment, Liszt asked, "Is Li Vera also involved?" - CanadianWolf2dCommented
Liszt is the wrong name as this should be the brother that is talking with him.
Lidun's maternal family was just a minor nobility, hardly worth mentioning, but one had to admit, his mother, the current Countess, definitely had influence over his father. As a result, nearly half of Tulip Castle's resources had been allocated to Lidun—causing Liszt indescribable pain and even resentment towards his father. - CanadianWolf2dCommented
Why are you using the same name for both brothers, you are making it confusing?
He became an Earth Knight at thirteen, and at twenty-one, everyone said he could become another Tulip Sky Knight like his father. But he alone knew the enormous chasm that lay between an Earth Knight and a Sky Knight—pouring all the resources of the family into it might still not be enough to lift him there.