Wow, Malena is hyper sexualized, and is described by her “luscious curves” every time she appears. Great job at writing female characters with depth, author… *gag*

Pym’s memories and mind were sealed so he cant possibly be working on that.

Yeha but Alex only started the absorption AFTER Alice returned to earth- why didnt he decide to not start the ritual and just defeat Alice? The only reason he did the ritual was because he was afraid of Alice getting stronger while she was hidden- so when she revealed herself, he didnt need to do the ritual anymore.

I think it really is the pure MCU universe, it’s just that the universe is situated inside the broader multiverse

He also got the percentage for Mana Regeneration Lv. 6, which should have a 150% increase not a 160% one

I think he just didnt give Guy’s family name. That’s my explanation at least, as the character “Guy” appeared before this

The translation is too hard to understand…

The MC makes some annoying choices, leaving clues that would unravel their secret identity for no purpose. For example, chunin exam fights have no benefit to her as she doesnt care about Konoha, so she has no reason to use abilities she shouldnt have during it… Also she antagonizes some people for no reason- it’s clear she’s crazy and irrational. Besides that, though, the concept of this story was amazing and I loved reading it!

Amaterasu doesnt work like that in canon- it doesnt manifest at the eye and get shot forward, it literally appears ON the target. So there’s no way for telekinesis to “catch” it before it reaches the person

I mean, this is totally Kaede’s fault for being so arrogant and whimsical to leak hidden info for no reason… she should’ve known Itachi would do this to her

Her reasoning for revealing that she’s Gaara doesn’t make any sense… at least not the way it’s explained

How does she predate on the sword without dissolving/eating it? Also what does degenerate do?

Unbelievably good for a naruto fanfiction. It’s a wonderful progression fantasy, and the MC exploits things that were forgotten as filler in canon. I especially love how he uses other bodies (when his power in his main body starts to grow too large)