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may I ask where these two books are so I may find them?
And how many men withdraw after being wronged by women?
nah, the pretentiousness is pretty hilarious tbh
honestly. I hear people talk about Idiot MC. that was chapter two. of course, she's an idiot. zero life growth of any kind before death. though some of the grammar and accuracy of science could use some work, all in all, it's not bad of a book. Definitely read worse. If I wanted an immaculate English reading with solid consistency, I read Tolkien. this is not a terrible book, but you definitely need to be patient with it. still give it average views, but keep it up, author. practice does, in fact, make perfect.
Its me the Author, I have no sense of shame, at all. It's my first book so it will not be perfect, and updates will be inconsistent at best. I do hope at the end you enjoy what I do write. See you in the next chapter.
Unless, of course, you're Manohar
You know, I see many people in the comments asking why people think the way they do. so I'll just give a little bit of real life. In a system that still used nobility as its governing force, the only thing that matters is power. There is no such thing as a "good" noble. They may do good thing ls for their country or people, but they themselves are not good people. Everything is a power play. Everything is an agenda to drive. The only thing that matters is power and how to use it. Narcissism is the only thing that can exist in a system like this. The kingdom was doomed to fail the moment it decided to go with bloodlines and nobility over merit.
honestly, just execute them right now.
No, I understand your frustration. I don't mind her not being arrogant, but this over stating of humility is getting irritating. I dont really mind her mother being shouded in mystery because that can be explored when Aster is older. But this is definitely toxic humility.